Comments on: Words for Down There https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/ Literate Smut and Dirty Pictures Thu, 14 Nov 2013 07:26:19 +0000 hourly 1 By: Joan https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-128 Tue, 16 Oct 2012 23:49:30 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-128 I have heard the theory that her “inner goddess” is, in fact, just a euphemism for her vagina. I figured it was more like… her conscious? Or… something.

Good grief, that book is a mess.

]]> By: Heather https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-127 Tue, 16 Oct 2012 23:08:26 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-127 Really, you have a problem with “down there” but failed to mention “inner goddess?” then again, perhaps her inner goddess was more of the feeling she had when he did the things he did to her, but it was used often enough that I now associate it with her body parts.

“Sex” is one that just doesn’t seem quite right to me. It doesn’t necessarily bother me, but sex is a verb, not a noun.

]]> By: Rich https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-126 Thu, 13 Sep 2012 04:39:03 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-126 You make it sound like a Sybian machine. Or, was that a recommendation how to spice up the intro?…

]]> By: Rich https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-125 Thu, 13 Sep 2012 04:35:34 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-125 I’ll have to “pump it up” then. Ha! Thanks!

]]> By: Joan https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-124 Wed, 12 Sep 2012 04:00:08 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-124 “pounding the sauce in the mortar?”

]]> By: Jenny Lyn https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-123 Tue, 11 Sep 2012 20:48:50 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-123 I thought those quite normal myself, Rich. Terrible to me = flowery or something that induces eye-rolling, like calling a dick a “raging beast of passion”. Or something to that effect.

]]> By: Joan https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-122 Tue, 11 Sep 2012 20:34:08 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-122 :D

]]> By: Rich https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-121 Mon, 10 Sep 2012 06:08:21 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-121 I reviewed the opening to my (unpublished) book and I got these words:

naked forms
left nipple
firm post
tit
muscles down there
rod
gathered flesh
his flesh inside her
warm dampness
intimate contact
raised ridges
naked torso

So, I guess I’m in the terrible euphemisms class.

]]> By: Jenny Lyn https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-120 Fri, 07 Sep 2012 19:22:06 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-120 I know! Wal-mart of all places. Target too. She deserves the accolades so much more than 50. Gross. Tiff says it’s an 8-book (I think) series, with more than one story arc. Should be interesting. Soren freaked me out too, but truly nothing in the book bothered me. I loved Griffin and Wesley. And Kingsley. So yeah, I’m hooked.

]]> By: Joan https://joandefers.com/2012/09/words-for-down-there/#comment-119 Thu, 06 Sep 2012 19:46:33 +0000 https://joandefers.com/?p=760#comment-119 I liked it! I am sort of scared of Soren! I am so beyond surprised Harlequin let the underage thing in there at all!

I am using exclamation marks!

It kind of reminded me of Anne Rice. I am interested to see where she goes with it, so I’m looking forward to the next one.

I so wish her book had gone viral instead of 50 Shades. I saw both of them at Wal-Mart the other day.

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